Whisperings in winter:
tales of memory and loss
chiseled in stone--
everywhere, the fallen.
Quietly lingering
amidst discarded wishes
and dreams of rebirth:
a lone figure
somehow summoning healing
in the passing shadows.
A scent of moss and ashes:
drifting, earthy,
leaves crackling underfoot,
trampled like so many forgotten hopes.
One too young, found:
lying grey,
cold, exposed--
not cracked,
but split quite in two,
awaiting eternal repair.
trying my hand at some pre-Halloween poetry for Magpie 38.
Very nice mag. Sad, but then the mention of 'eternal repair.' Undoubtedly needed by all!
ReplyDeleteThe line ... awaiting eternal repair ... also caught my attention. That's a lot of work.
ReplyDeleteDelightful word in your poem. So peaceful!
ReplyDeletewe all can use eternal repair! Nice Magpie
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. I especially like "the scent of moss and ashes". Very nice.
ReplyDeleteIntense wordplay here adding to teh whole dynamic of the piece. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done.
ReplyDelete"..awaiting eternal repair." Something we all hope for. Nice Magpie.
ReplyDeleteit was the last verse that got to me...one taken too young in particular...nice emotional magpie...
ReplyDeleteThat is lovely, so evocative.
ReplyDeleteA great magpie!!
ReplyDeleteOh that last verse! I hate it when the too young die. It isn't fair. Beautiful... Beautiful Magpie, Hausfrau.
ReplyDeleteA sad tale, but beautifully worded.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully told sad tale... 'too young die' kind of lingers in the heart. nicely written.
ReplyDeleteThough brief, "summoning healing" and "eternal repair" bring balance to the sadness of the poem. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words X
ReplyDeleteP.S Thankyou for the lovely 'Welcome Back' X
A big thanks for the lovely, insightful comments! I hope to visit you all soon, as I didn't quite have time last week.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful...I didn't know you were such a gifted poet as well!
ReplyDeleteQuietly lingering
amidst discarded wishes
I love that.
This is stunning. Just beautiful and evocative.
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